Monday, September 25, 2006

Haze




The rain falls in tender drops -
The ones that barely show
As if the clouds can't commit
To holding back or letting flow

Tulips look up in disdain
Petals in partial bloom
Judging the worth of the wait
Doubting a vision will ever loom

Will it remain an endless pause
To estimate and to assess
Will it lure a full-grown storm
Or continue to be nothingness

Oft I walk these gloomy streets
In the misty cold
Hosting suspicions
Not knowing what is to unfold

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6 comments:

Prashanth said...

You're back!!

I like the metaphors in this one. Waiting for more!

P said...

Beautiful...

pavan kumar said...

nice pic, but gloomy mood.. how about some humor-laden post from you?

sunshine said...

@ prashanth: thank u!!! more will be coming .. but its still a lil slow..

@persp: :D

@ pavan kumar: y cudn't u jus appreciate the metaphors like prashanth .. nyways.. humor it will be.. once the workload lightens a bit

direkishore said...

tat was lovely!

Unknown said...

that's some good metaphor &, nice rhyming as yours always are :)